Post by dasuka on Jun 15, 2006 23:03:27 GMT -5
Just one of my many creepy horror stories... Nowhere near my best... Just seein what's da community wants, Input is asked of so's I know's what ta post next...
No pai...
Meidum gore...
Moderate swearing...
Death Valley: The Haunted Highway
For those of you who have seen the movie, "Monster Man", This may seem a little bit similar.
A little.
Long ago in the far past there was a family of ruthless Outsiders know only as,
"The Shadow Clan"
They inhabated the state of Arizona near a deserted highway, Specificly Interstate highway 666. Now it is said the "Shadow Clan" Was viciously ended when a band of people good with the firearm came to the county, or so it is said. To this day passing motorists are warned of the Shadow Clan's haunting spirit lingering in highway itself still. Although, The spirits aint the only thing haunting the county to this day . . .
Present day
Welcome to Helldoner county, One of the few ghost towns in the US that's still actually alive. The population count around these parts cant be accuratly kept for odd reasons that seem to come out of nowhere. But you came to sightsee with your friends. You are all out on your own and looking for a interesting place to "rest your roots". As your friend, Moss says. You all are looking for a little action. Little do you know it, But your about to have a hell of a time in Helldoner County. You stop at a local gas station and ask for directions to the nearest motel as you fill up your Rv. The gentelman looks at you with a stern face and simply replies. You DONT wanna stop in this county. You look at the man strangely and pay him for the gas. Everyone asks what he said and you reply. We're gonna go camp out in some field, He said the places around here are just plain dirty. You pull out of the gas station and head down a interstate highway numbered, 666. Strange, Anyways you see a nice clearing and drive into a fairly secluded spot a ways in the woods. You get out to look around and find a small river a few hundred yards to the West. As you climb back in and get ready you swear you can smell something in the air, Something rotten. Must have hit some roadkill. You set down at the table while everyone gathers around the food. Your girlfriend has cooked some porkchops while you were traveling down the road. Your friends are amazed, Not many women will cook a meal. Espcally while going down the road. Ya got a real catch there. says Farva. Yeah I know, She's the best aint she. you admire your Honey as you converse with everyone. I was talking to Alana, Not you. says Farva smugly. You make a face at him and chew on your porkchop extra hard. As you all are eating the smell has attracted a small group of animals curious to the smell, As well as something else. Later on in the night you recluse to the back to challange Farva to a little game of Halo to see who sleeps with Alana tonight. You both fight furiouly and just as you are about to get the final kill the power goes out and your game is lost. DAMMIT ! you yell. Better luck next time. says Farva grinning from ear to ear. Guess that means you forfet. he grins. Why dont ya go forfet your self off a cliff. says Moss. No one understands. Tom ends up geting to sleep with Alana. You stomp out to the plug and see that the cord running from the power pole has been cut and is covered in blood on the ends. You slowly put the cord down and run to the Rv. You slam the door shut and open the counter below the sink. What the heck are you doin? asks Moss as you dig through the supplys. You find your little wooden box and open it up and take out your Uzi and load an clip in it and pull the hammer back still holding the end of the cord firmly in your other hand. Everyone is beginning to freak out now. Dude, put the gun down and tell us what happened. Tom says slowly. You hold up the bloody end of the cord. I found this outside. You say. So, Some animal chewed through the cord and got zapped, So what? says Tom slowly. Whatever did this is still out there, And its no little furry animal. You start the rv and pull out of the feild. Im not staying here to die. you proclaim as you back out on to the highway and take off down the road doing at least Eighty. May I ask what exactly you think it is? asked Alana. I dunno, But how could some little animal have chewed through the cord that fast, let alone leave that much blood. Something MEANT to cut the cord, The blood is what I dont understand. You hell on down the highway. We'll just find somewhere to stop for the night. You find a small campground that says free camping and hookup, Stay at your own risk. You drive in and park near the road just in case. You get out and go into the camp store to find a small and withered old man. Sir, May I ask why the sign says camp at own risk? The little man gets up and shows you a picture of a small family, They look like they have been through a meat grinder. There is a pshycotic group of killers called the Shadow Clan, Killed that whole family in their home. May ask where their home was? you ask boldly. The old man looks at you and raises his furry brows. Your standing in it. he says. At this point your just a bit freaked, But you walk out of the little house and retreat to the "supposed" safety of your moterhome with friends in tow. None of you can sleep, Every sound outside keeps you all on your toes. Fiannaly you get up and see its three in the morning. You say enough with this town and prepare to take off. You pick up your Uzi and walk outside to unhook everything. As you unhook the electric you hear a sound over your shoulder. You can see Tom's reflection in the shiny paint. What do you want Tom. pizza how did ya know it was me? I could see your reflection in the paint. Aww well pizza, I was gonna scare the crap outta ya. Well, ya did so there. You walk back inside and put the key in the igniton. Time ta get the hell outta here. You turn the key, All the way, But no engine starts. What the hell did ya do to my Rv Tom? Tom looks at you stunned. I didnt do anything, I swear. You look over all the gauges. Nothing seems to be wrong. Tom looks out the windshield and gets a extreamly scared look on his face and pulls his camera to his face and takes a picture slowly. You look to where he is staring and see, OH my god, You almost puke when you see HALF of the old man hanging on the clothesline, Blood dripping from his agape mouth. Tom looks to the dashboard and franticaly tries to see what is wrong. Fiannaly you think to look at the fuse panel. You open the hatch and see a blackned fuse, it is in the slot labeled, Starter. You sigh out of releif and go to the closet and look through your fuses looking for a 30 Amp. You finnaly find one and give tom the Uzi. If anything happens, Kill it. Tom nods his head and takes the Uzi. You pull out the charred fuse. You scream as it is still red hot. You wonder why it is so hot. You fiannaly get it out and replace it with the new fuse and put the panel back on. You cautiously turn the key. You are relived to hear 12 cylinders turn over and roar a unison of horsepower. Lets get the hell outta here ! you yell as you pull out waking everyone in the process. Later on Tom tells everyone the whole story. They themselves cant beleave it. Until Tom shows them the picture he took with his instant camera. Everyone agrees that they are moving on to somewhere else. All of your thoughts are abruptly halted when suddenly the engine begins to spit and sputter wildly. You try to keep it going but something is terribly wrong. Tom goes to the back and comes running back, Hey, Whats it mean when we have brown smoke coming outta the tailpipe. The engine fiannaly dies. The Rv comes to a complete stop. Brown? says Moss, Aint never heard of brown. You put your head in your hands as you raise the hood. Something doesnt smell right, In fact, Something REALLY stinks ! Then you see something coming from the tailpipe. You go to the back and look at it. Your worst fears are confirmed when you put a bit on your finger and look at it. Blood. Somehow blood got in the engine somehow. You slowly open the gas cap and dip a flexable tube down in the gas and bring it back out. Whats left on it is a goopy brown substance, Gas mixed with blood, Someone or something put blood in your gas, and in turn ruined the gas. Your stranded, ten miles from the campground. You look to the horizon and see a sign not far. I'll go down there and see if I can get some help, Anyone who wants to come, Come. Everyone followed you as you keep your hand on your Uzi. You get to the gas station and find a mechanic. Sir? The mechanic rolls out from under a half built truck.Yeah? My motorhome is stuck on the road with...Blood in the fuel tank. Blood ya say, Yer not gonna beleave this but your NOT the first. A couple was in here last week with the same problem. They were found alongside the road in the flattened car. Cops said it was run over by sumpthin. You cringe, Can you repair my Rv? Why of course I can, For a price. Name it. you say. Fifty bucks. You hand the man $200 and plead him to make it fast. He gets in his towtruck and you all ride on the back. When you get to the Rv you find someone has covered it in roadkill and blood. Quite the nice rig ya got there. The man goes to work flushing out the fuel tank. He then runs some cleaner through the motor and primes the engine. Okay, Now let me fill ya back up and you'll be on your way. After a half hour of waiting you are ready to get going. You climb in the driver's seat and turn it over. It starts right up. You jump out of the driver's seat and hug the filthy man. Thank you so much, here's another $100. You give the extra cash and drive off after cleaning off most of the roadkill. Luckly it rains that night and washes the remaining blood off as you drive down the road. You get back to town and tell the locals of your brushes with death. They all agree, They all live in fear too. They say these are signs that the Shadow Clan has a thing for ya. You show them your Uzi and say. Well then I guess I gotta thing fer him. you lie. Later you take off after getting a bite to eat and a bit of relaxation. You are driving back down the highway when you notice its highway 666. You tell Tom to take the wheel as you go to the back and laydown. You look over a map one of the locals gave ya. According to this map this highway is supposedly haunted. It runs from Arizona to the border of Mexico. You look out the window when you see something out of the corner of your eye. There is a hearse following you down the road. Talk about creepy. Thankfully it passes you in a hurry. Tom mentions it as well. At this point everyone just wants ta go home. Soon you will all be heading into good old California. As you sit and read the map a sinister vehicle pulls up behind your Rv. You set and read how the county has been plauged for centurys by some unknown assasins. There were also sightings of a hearse and mysterious vehicle near the areas of the killings. Your blood suddenly runs ice cold when you remember what just passed you. The strange vehicle behind you guns its motor and rams the Rv. Now everyone knows of its presnese. You look out the window at this strange vehicle. Its a monster truck, But it looks like a tank ! And it has a strange type of thing on its front, Every time the vehicle accelerates the front drops down and a strange ramming device slides out from the front. Thats what it hits ya with. He rams you agian. He is causing damage but he dosent have enough power to push the 30+ ton vehicle off the road, And his ram thing is too low to flip you. You run and get your Uzi and begin to shoot at the truck. But your Uzi is inaffective agianst this vehicle. The bullets merely bounce off its armor harmlessly. Tom is driving to the Arizona border when the truck begins to back off slowly. You watch as the truck slows until it competely stops. You wonder why. You soon find out when the truck suddenly comes helling at you at round 90+ Mph. Floor it ! you yell. The Rv lurches and tops out at around 102 Mph. The truck is quickly gaining on you. Tom yells, We gotta slow down, the dam engines overheatin ! You watch as the truck quickly gains and suddenly lurches but this time does a whellie and lands on the rear of the Rv. slowing it down tremondously. You watch as the monster truck then begins to continualy crush it under its wheels until it pushes the frame to the ground and halts it completly in a shower of sparks. Before anyone can think of what to do you are all crushed inside the Rv as the massive truck smashes it and keeps on going down the highway leaving bloody tire marks.
A few days later the local sheriff finds your "Compact" Rv flat as a fritter alongside the road with human entrails coming from some of the windows. The monster truck suddenly pulls up and revs it's massive engine but then shuts off. A hideous "creature" covered in a mysterious cloak climbs from the truck and stares at the sherrif. The sherrif looks to the man and fiannaly says. Well dont just stand there dumbass, Help me collect all the guts !
No pai...
Meidum gore...
Moderate swearing...
Death Valley: The Haunted Highway
For those of you who have seen the movie, "Monster Man", This may seem a little bit similar.
A little.
Long ago in the far past there was a family of ruthless Outsiders know only as,
"The Shadow Clan"
They inhabated the state of Arizona near a deserted highway, Specificly Interstate highway 666. Now it is said the "Shadow Clan" Was viciously ended when a band of people good with the firearm came to the county, or so it is said. To this day passing motorists are warned of the Shadow Clan's haunting spirit lingering in highway itself still. Although, The spirits aint the only thing haunting the county to this day . . .
Present day
Welcome to Helldoner county, One of the few ghost towns in the US that's still actually alive. The population count around these parts cant be accuratly kept for odd reasons that seem to come out of nowhere. But you came to sightsee with your friends. You are all out on your own and looking for a interesting place to "rest your roots". As your friend, Moss says. You all are looking for a little action. Little do you know it, But your about to have a hell of a time in Helldoner County. You stop at a local gas station and ask for directions to the nearest motel as you fill up your Rv. The gentelman looks at you with a stern face and simply replies. You DONT wanna stop in this county. You look at the man strangely and pay him for the gas. Everyone asks what he said and you reply. We're gonna go camp out in some field, He said the places around here are just plain dirty. You pull out of the gas station and head down a interstate highway numbered, 666. Strange, Anyways you see a nice clearing and drive into a fairly secluded spot a ways in the woods. You get out to look around and find a small river a few hundred yards to the West. As you climb back in and get ready you swear you can smell something in the air, Something rotten. Must have hit some roadkill. You set down at the table while everyone gathers around the food. Your girlfriend has cooked some porkchops while you were traveling down the road. Your friends are amazed, Not many women will cook a meal. Espcally while going down the road. Ya got a real catch there. says Farva. Yeah I know, She's the best aint she. you admire your Honey as you converse with everyone. I was talking to Alana, Not you. says Farva smugly. You make a face at him and chew on your porkchop extra hard. As you all are eating the smell has attracted a small group of animals curious to the smell, As well as something else. Later on in the night you recluse to the back to challange Farva to a little game of Halo to see who sleeps with Alana tonight. You both fight furiouly and just as you are about to get the final kill the power goes out and your game is lost. DAMMIT ! you yell. Better luck next time. says Farva grinning from ear to ear. Guess that means you forfet. he grins. Why dont ya go forfet your self off a cliff. says Moss. No one understands. Tom ends up geting to sleep with Alana. You stomp out to the plug and see that the cord running from the power pole has been cut and is covered in blood on the ends. You slowly put the cord down and run to the Rv. You slam the door shut and open the counter below the sink. What the heck are you doin? asks Moss as you dig through the supplys. You find your little wooden box and open it up and take out your Uzi and load an clip in it and pull the hammer back still holding the end of the cord firmly in your other hand. Everyone is beginning to freak out now. Dude, put the gun down and tell us what happened. Tom says slowly. You hold up the bloody end of the cord. I found this outside. You say. So, Some animal chewed through the cord and got zapped, So what? says Tom slowly. Whatever did this is still out there, And its no little furry animal. You start the rv and pull out of the feild. Im not staying here to die. you proclaim as you back out on to the highway and take off down the road doing at least Eighty. May I ask what exactly you think it is? asked Alana. I dunno, But how could some little animal have chewed through the cord that fast, let alone leave that much blood. Something MEANT to cut the cord, The blood is what I dont understand. You hell on down the highway. We'll just find somewhere to stop for the night. You find a small campground that says free camping and hookup, Stay at your own risk. You drive in and park near the road just in case. You get out and go into the camp store to find a small and withered old man. Sir, May I ask why the sign says camp at own risk? The little man gets up and shows you a picture of a small family, They look like they have been through a meat grinder. There is a pshycotic group of killers called the Shadow Clan, Killed that whole family in their home. May ask where their home was? you ask boldly. The old man looks at you and raises his furry brows. Your standing in it. he says. At this point your just a bit freaked, But you walk out of the little house and retreat to the "supposed" safety of your moterhome with friends in tow. None of you can sleep, Every sound outside keeps you all on your toes. Fiannaly you get up and see its three in the morning. You say enough with this town and prepare to take off. You pick up your Uzi and walk outside to unhook everything. As you unhook the electric you hear a sound over your shoulder. You can see Tom's reflection in the shiny paint. What do you want Tom. pizza how did ya know it was me? I could see your reflection in the paint. Aww well pizza, I was gonna scare the crap outta ya. Well, ya did so there. You walk back inside and put the key in the igniton. Time ta get the hell outta here. You turn the key, All the way, But no engine starts. What the hell did ya do to my Rv Tom? Tom looks at you stunned. I didnt do anything, I swear. You look over all the gauges. Nothing seems to be wrong. Tom looks out the windshield and gets a extreamly scared look on his face and pulls his camera to his face and takes a picture slowly. You look to where he is staring and see, OH my god, You almost puke when you see HALF of the old man hanging on the clothesline, Blood dripping from his agape mouth. Tom looks to the dashboard and franticaly tries to see what is wrong. Fiannaly you think to look at the fuse panel. You open the hatch and see a blackned fuse, it is in the slot labeled, Starter. You sigh out of releif and go to the closet and look through your fuses looking for a 30 Amp. You finnaly find one and give tom the Uzi. If anything happens, Kill it. Tom nods his head and takes the Uzi. You pull out the charred fuse. You scream as it is still red hot. You wonder why it is so hot. You fiannaly get it out and replace it with the new fuse and put the panel back on. You cautiously turn the key. You are relived to hear 12 cylinders turn over and roar a unison of horsepower. Lets get the hell outta here ! you yell as you pull out waking everyone in the process. Later on Tom tells everyone the whole story. They themselves cant beleave it. Until Tom shows them the picture he took with his instant camera. Everyone agrees that they are moving on to somewhere else. All of your thoughts are abruptly halted when suddenly the engine begins to spit and sputter wildly. You try to keep it going but something is terribly wrong. Tom goes to the back and comes running back, Hey, Whats it mean when we have brown smoke coming outta the tailpipe. The engine fiannaly dies. The Rv comes to a complete stop. Brown? says Moss, Aint never heard of brown. You put your head in your hands as you raise the hood. Something doesnt smell right, In fact, Something REALLY stinks ! Then you see something coming from the tailpipe. You go to the back and look at it. Your worst fears are confirmed when you put a bit on your finger and look at it. Blood. Somehow blood got in the engine somehow. You slowly open the gas cap and dip a flexable tube down in the gas and bring it back out. Whats left on it is a goopy brown substance, Gas mixed with blood, Someone or something put blood in your gas, and in turn ruined the gas. Your stranded, ten miles from the campground. You look to the horizon and see a sign not far. I'll go down there and see if I can get some help, Anyone who wants to come, Come. Everyone followed you as you keep your hand on your Uzi. You get to the gas station and find a mechanic. Sir? The mechanic rolls out from under a half built truck.Yeah? My motorhome is stuck on the road with...Blood in the fuel tank. Blood ya say, Yer not gonna beleave this but your NOT the first. A couple was in here last week with the same problem. They were found alongside the road in the flattened car. Cops said it was run over by sumpthin. You cringe, Can you repair my Rv? Why of course I can, For a price. Name it. you say. Fifty bucks. You hand the man $200 and plead him to make it fast. He gets in his towtruck and you all ride on the back. When you get to the Rv you find someone has covered it in roadkill and blood. Quite the nice rig ya got there. The man goes to work flushing out the fuel tank. He then runs some cleaner through the motor and primes the engine. Okay, Now let me fill ya back up and you'll be on your way. After a half hour of waiting you are ready to get going. You climb in the driver's seat and turn it over. It starts right up. You jump out of the driver's seat and hug the filthy man. Thank you so much, here's another $100. You give the extra cash and drive off after cleaning off most of the roadkill. Luckly it rains that night and washes the remaining blood off as you drive down the road. You get back to town and tell the locals of your brushes with death. They all agree, They all live in fear too. They say these are signs that the Shadow Clan has a thing for ya. You show them your Uzi and say. Well then I guess I gotta thing fer him. you lie. Later you take off after getting a bite to eat and a bit of relaxation. You are driving back down the highway when you notice its highway 666. You tell Tom to take the wheel as you go to the back and laydown. You look over a map one of the locals gave ya. According to this map this highway is supposedly haunted. It runs from Arizona to the border of Mexico. You look out the window when you see something out of the corner of your eye. There is a hearse following you down the road. Talk about creepy. Thankfully it passes you in a hurry. Tom mentions it as well. At this point everyone just wants ta go home. Soon you will all be heading into good old California. As you sit and read the map a sinister vehicle pulls up behind your Rv. You set and read how the county has been plauged for centurys by some unknown assasins. There were also sightings of a hearse and mysterious vehicle near the areas of the killings. Your blood suddenly runs ice cold when you remember what just passed you. The strange vehicle behind you guns its motor and rams the Rv. Now everyone knows of its presnese. You look out the window at this strange vehicle. Its a monster truck, But it looks like a tank ! And it has a strange type of thing on its front, Every time the vehicle accelerates the front drops down and a strange ramming device slides out from the front. Thats what it hits ya with. He rams you agian. He is causing damage but he dosent have enough power to push the 30+ ton vehicle off the road, And his ram thing is too low to flip you. You run and get your Uzi and begin to shoot at the truck. But your Uzi is inaffective agianst this vehicle. The bullets merely bounce off its armor harmlessly. Tom is driving to the Arizona border when the truck begins to back off slowly. You watch as the truck slows until it competely stops. You wonder why. You soon find out when the truck suddenly comes helling at you at round 90+ Mph. Floor it ! you yell. The Rv lurches and tops out at around 102 Mph. The truck is quickly gaining on you. Tom yells, We gotta slow down, the dam engines overheatin ! You watch as the truck quickly gains and suddenly lurches but this time does a whellie and lands on the rear of the Rv. slowing it down tremondously. You watch as the monster truck then begins to continualy crush it under its wheels until it pushes the frame to the ground and halts it completly in a shower of sparks. Before anyone can think of what to do you are all crushed inside the Rv as the massive truck smashes it and keeps on going down the highway leaving bloody tire marks.
A few days later the local sheriff finds your "Compact" Rv flat as a fritter alongside the road with human entrails coming from some of the windows. The monster truck suddenly pulls up and revs it's massive engine but then shuts off. A hideous "creature" covered in a mysterious cloak climbs from the truck and stares at the sherrif. The sherrif looks to the man and fiannaly says. Well dont just stand there dumbass, Help me collect all the guts !